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Title: Frozen In Flux
Characters: Barbara, Romana II
Rating: G
Summary: So many wrongs had been caused in the pursuit of ‘right’
Notes: A mention of Meglos, very vague spoilers for School Reunion. Unbetaed, but I'm not very good at accurately judging how much sense my stories make to others.

Barbara took a deep shaky breath. “I thought…he looked exactly like-”

“Everyone’s got at least one physical duplicate,” Romana pulled her TARDIS key from her pocket and looked around sharply. “And don’t you dare apologise.”

Barbara closed her mouth and smiled ruefully, as a sudden memory caused a painful twinge. The roles had been reversed and it hadn’t been Romana she’d been talking to but-

Romana opened the door and waved her inside. “I met someone who looked like you once. On the planet Meglos.” Moving to the console, Romana set the TARDIS in motion and turned to face Barbara. “Her name was Lexa. High Priest Lexa.”

“What was she like?” Barbara moved to her side and watched the Time Rotor, so different to what she’d been used to a lifetime ago.

“Different.” Romana brushed a lock of dark hair back from Barbara’s too-young face. “Older.”

“In aspect or in years?” Eyes like Romana's own looked back at her; eyes which were too old for the body.

She turned back to the console. “Both, strictly speaking. You should go and clean yourself up.”

Barbara paused halfway to the doorway when Romana spoke again.
“We will find him, you know.” The reassurance that she could never give hung unspoken in the air: and then everything will be alright.

Barbara nodded.

Romana watched her go. She walked like an old woman when she relaxed, like the old woman she could remember being.

Forever young. Forever alone. Fixed and unchanging as the foundations of the universe were relaid beneath her feet. Stranded in a world which had become alien with the passing of years that she’d never lived through, with memories of a life that she’d never had.

So many wrongs had been caused in the pursuit of ‘right’. So much was broken as he tried to ‘fix’ the universe.

If it isn’t broken, don’t fix it.

Date: 2007-05-17 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
A nice little pouch of literature. I wish you'd put your fiction into your journal more often; as you know it's well-nigh impossible for me to review your work on FF.Net, and it will probably stay that way until late September, when I go off to uni.

But this is nice, very moving. I get the feeling that there's backstory to this that I haven't seen/read, but I'll hazard a guess that they're looking for the Doctor? I'm sure you'll explain to me the bits I don't quite get because of my estrangement from your fics/lack of classic Who knowldge. But in itself it's well-written and evocative. Very nice work.

Chris :)

Date: 2007-05-17 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Even though I don't know the characters, I liked the way you wrote them. :D


Date: 2007-05-18 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
This was beautiful and fantastic and the two of these together has just given me a host of smut. I love the line,
Eyes like Romana's own looked back at her; eyes which were too old for the body.

It conveys so much emotion and plot in such a little bit, it's amazing.

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